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Now and Then

… 50-word fiction by young, guest authors …

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Last July I met Marlena Henry, a teacher in Granite School District,  at a professional development class I taught. You have her to blame for introducing me to 50-word fiction. I decided I should honor her by posting some of her 9th-grade students’ works. Be prepared to be WoWeD!

In the Way

His footsteps were loud against the platform. “I have done nothing!” He cried as the noose wrapped tightly around his neck. The desperate cries of the condemned.

As the podium gave way, two people smiled. The first his brother, now destined to inherit the crown. Another his sister, with only one more in her way.

Here are a couple of fun ones:

Morning

The rebel awakened, finding himself in his room. He knew that today would be the day. Death was on his doorstep. Doomsday was calling to him. His very existence was pointless unless he could avoid this condemnation. The door opened, and his warden approached.

“You’re late for school, Son.

Note: Sadly, the third student example, “The Fool Who Invented Kissing,”  was not an original piece of writing.  Yes, it was plagiarized! Dang! Teachers try so hard to curb this kind of behavior, and it is so disappointing. I have contacted the teacher, Marlena. The student is not in her class anymore, but she can still find him.

My apologies to the writer who truly authored this fun piece.

Author: rbs

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4 thoughts on “… 50-word fiction by young, guest authors …

  1. Wow is right!!! I don’t know how I missed this post – but what a great one!!! I’m just loving all the 50 worders… Soooo great!

    • I love these and will pass them onto teachers to inspire their students. I know our kids will knock off socks with their creative creations!

      Hope your weekend is SO fun!

  2. “The Fool Who Invented Kissing” is copyrighted material written by Doug Long and Copyright by 2815699 Canada Inc. This was NOT written by a student, but plagiarized from the Web.

    If you wish to excerpt from our copyrighted material, we require attribution to author Doug Long, a copyright notice, and an active link to http://www.55wordfiction.com

    Please remedy this as soon as possible and notify us at: publish@biznetcommunications.com

    • My apologies! Thank you for this heads-up. I have removed the offending piece and notified the teacher of the student’s deception and dishonesty.

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